Now let us never speak of that time again.
Move the comma from the “But” in panel 1 to the “it” in panel 2.
Panel 4: Do the same for the one at the end of “suddenly”, to “around”.
a) disagree b) possibly, either work, it see depends on how the flow of the speech was intended
I love Cal’s suspicious face in the final panel :-D.
‘Fine’ may not be the right word to use here…
Move the comma from the “But” in panel 1 to the “it” in panel 2.
Panel 4: Do the same for the one at the end of “suddenly”, to “around”.
a) disagree
b) possibly, either work, it see depends on how the flow of the speech was intended
I love Cal’s suspicious face in the final panel :-D.
‘Fine’ may not be the right word to use here…