9/5/2021 - I am going to take the Monday holiday - page 13 will post sometime before the heat death of the universe
Panel 1: “well laid out” should be hyphenated.
Panel 4: There should be commas at the ends of “so” and “Oh”.
I disagree with the panel 1 comment and the panel 4 comment depends entirely on how the author intended the inflections of the speech in those sentences to go. How it’s written makes just as much sense as how you have suggested.
So long as it’s not a story about how you should never accept food from strangers in case they’ve drugged it which slowly lulls us to sleep…
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