Panel 4: Drop the comma from “and”.
Also, sorry I took so long. I couldn’t leave a comment here when you posted this and then I forgot.
If he’s pausing for effect before that final charge then the comma stays. (Or possibly affect, I can never remember those).
Does it still count as kidnapping if it was her idea?
Panel 4: Drop the comma from “and”.
Also, sorry I took so long. I couldn’t leave a comment here when you posted this and then I forgot.
If he’s pausing for effect before that final charge then the comma stays. (Or possibly affect, I can never remember those).
Does it still count as kidnapping if it was her idea?