Oooh I see! Hmm, I guess I was confused because the postures in panel 3 seems to show that the city was ahead of them. Maybe the figures should have been mostly facing away from the city to make this clear? With their heads turned at the sound, to make the context clearer.
I’m not understanding panel 4… what are we seeing here? A distant building? Why would they want to avoid that? And what’s that sound?
they are looking back the way they came – the city of women is being attacked by birds and lightning
Oooh I see! Hmm, I guess I was confused because the postures in panel 3 seems to show that the city was ahead of them. Maybe the figures should have been mostly facing away from the city to make this clear? With their heads turned at the sound, to make the context clearer.
Just an idea.