The Black Orb

Discussion (3) ¬

1. 
   jprime

   September 18, 2020 at 2:14 pm | # | Reply

   Nice touch using “there there” as onomatopoeia.
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   jprime

   September 18, 2020 at 2:17 pm | # | Reply

   Also, I just realized, that first word balloon in panel 3 should be pointing to Cal, not Olly.

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     Busy Squirrel Press

     September 18, 2020 at 11:13 pm | # | Reply

     thanks, I fixed it!