I know the site's been a lil spotty lately - we moved to a new host this morning so HOPEFULLY that will help if you're still having problems pls shoot me an email at busysquirrelpress@gmail.com (you may need to clear your browser cache and whatnot also?)
Panel 2: Put commas at the end of “other” and “strong” and drop a “the”.
Thank you, thank you, thank you!
Sounds like a job for… Mysterious strangers who are new in town!